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		<title>By: admin</title>
		<link>http://www.adelejournal.com/2009/10/a-good-editor-should-leave-no-footprints/comment-page-1/#comment-220</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 17:28:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good to hear from you, Rob!  Thanks for stopping by.  I&#039;ll have to think about this -- it turned something on in my brain, but I&#039;m not sure what it is at this time...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good to hear from you, Rob!  Thanks for stopping by.  I&#8217;ll have to think about this &#8212; it turned something on in my brain, but I&#8217;m not sure what it is at this time&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Rob Pierce</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rob Pierce</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 06:32:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I publish a small magazine, with one other editor, and we line edit every story we accept. We then make our suggestions to the author. These are authors whose stories we&#039;ve already accepted, and it&#039;s up to them whether to agree with the edits.

My goal as an editor is to make my magazine as good as possible. I&#039;ve used my own phrasing in edits to suggest a direction, and when those phrases are more than minor tweaks I&#039;d probably be appalled if the author used those phrases. It&#039;s the author&#039;s voice that got me into the story in the first place. 

I have an idea of how a story should read, and people whose stories I&#039;ve accepted probably have similar ideas. But we sometimes run stories with lives of their own that we don&#039;t know how to edit. For the latest issue of Swill, I contacted one author to ask him about his paragraph formatting - I&#039;d started to mark it up when it occurred to me that I might be wrecking the rhythm of the whole piece. After checking with him, I left the bulk of the story alone.

Hell, I don&#039;t want to leave footprints. I got ugly feet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I publish a small magazine, with one other editor, and we line edit every story we accept. We then make our suggestions to the author. These are authors whose stories we&#8217;ve already accepted, and it&#8217;s up to them whether to agree with the edits.</p>
<p>My goal as an editor is to make my magazine as good as possible. I&#8217;ve used my own phrasing in edits to suggest a direction, and when those phrases are more than minor tweaks I&#8217;d probably be appalled if the author used those phrases. It&#8217;s the author&#8217;s voice that got me into the story in the first place. </p>
<p>I have an idea of how a story should read, and people whose stories I&#8217;ve accepted probably have similar ideas. But we sometimes run stories with lives of their own that we don&#8217;t know how to edit. For the latest issue of Swill, I contacted one author to ask him about his paragraph formatting &#8211; I&#8217;d started to mark it up when it occurred to me that I might be wrecking the rhythm of the whole piece. After checking with him, I left the bulk of the story alone.</p>
<p>Hell, I don&#8217;t want to leave footprints. I got ugly feet.</p>
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		<title>By: Bunker</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bunker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 04:03:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Valuable thoughts and advices. I read your topic with great interest.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Valuable thoughts and advices. I read your topic with great interest.</p>
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		<title>By: admin</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2009 18:37:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I definitely agree that an editor should respect an author&#039;s voice.  It&#039;s cool hearing from an editor -- I know it&#039;s really hard work.  Thanks for commenting!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I definitely agree that an editor should respect an author&#8217;s voice.  It&#8217;s cool hearing from an editor &#8212; I know it&#8217;s really hard work.  Thanks for commenting!</p>
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		<title>By: Jason Black</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jason Black</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2009 18:05:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re right, of course, but I like the sentiment of &quot;leave no footprints&quot; quite a lot.  I&#039;m a freelance book doctor myself, so this is more than a theoretical issue for me.

What &quot;leave no footprints&quot; really means, I&#039;d venture, is &quot;a good editor should recognize and respect the author&#039;s voice.&quot;

I&#039;ll go to my grave before anybody convinces me that&#039;s not true.

Granted, nine out of ten novels that cross my desk don&#039;t have much voice to begin with.  For them, it&#039;s my job to help the writers see where and how they can improve their craft, so maybe they&#039;ll develop a voice.

But when that tenth novel comes along, the voice jumps off the page.  It&#039;s clear as day, and it&#039;s a wonderful thing.  I should hang my head in shame if I screwed with the author&#039;s voice.

A good editor doesn&#039;t edit everything they see such that it ends up sounding like they wrote it.  A good editor should recognize and respect the voice of the author, and know how not to screw that up.

A great editor, further, is enough of a chameleon themselves to be able to take on the author&#039;s voice while editing.  A great author not only recognizes and respects the author&#039;s voice, but can actually enhance it while leaving the heart of it intact.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re right, of course, but I like the sentiment of &#8220;leave no footprints&#8221; quite a lot.  I&#8217;m a freelance book doctor myself, so this is more than a theoretical issue for me.</p>
<p>What &#8220;leave no footprints&#8221; really means, I&#8217;d venture, is &#8220;a good editor should recognize and respect the author&#8217;s voice.&#8221;</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll go to my grave before anybody convinces me that&#8217;s not true.</p>
<p>Granted, nine out of ten novels that cross my desk don&#8217;t have much voice to begin with.  For them, it&#8217;s my job to help the writers see where and how they can improve their craft, so maybe they&#8217;ll develop a voice.</p>
<p>But when that tenth novel comes along, the voice jumps off the page.  It&#8217;s clear as day, and it&#8217;s a wonderful thing.  I should hang my head in shame if I screwed with the author&#8217;s voice.</p>
<p>A good editor doesn&#8217;t edit everything they see such that it ends up sounding like they wrote it.  A good editor should recognize and respect the voice of the author, and know how not to screw that up.</p>
<p>A great editor, further, is enough of a chameleon themselves to be able to take on the author&#8217;s voice while editing.  A great author not only recognizes and respects the author&#8217;s voice, but can actually enhance it while leaving the heart of it intact.</p>
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